English translation below.
我今天接到过一封信从北京语言大学。他们写“我们荣幸地通知您…我校同意接收您作为普通进修生来本校学习，学习的间自2006年9月1日至2007年7月31日”。虽然我是一点紧张但是我很高兴。看来我在9月真的去中国。我现在应该找一房间在北京。
Today I got a letter from BLCU. They wrote “we are pleased to inform you that ... we have decided to enroll you to study at the College of Advanced Chinese Training as a General scholar student from September 1 2006 to July 31 2007”. Even though I’m a bit nervous I’m also very happy. It looks like I’m really going to China in September. Now I have to find a room in Beijing.
Well, it didn’t take that long for you to write this post with Chinese...
Great job overall...just a few mistakes
1.我今天接到一封从北京语言大学的信。 from blcu is the adjective for ‘letter’
2.学习的时间 (i believe this is a typo:P)
3.虽然我”有”一点紧张，但是我很高兴。we use 有 though in English is I AM a bit nervous
4.看来我在9月真的”要”去中国。我现在应该在北京找一套/间房间。
以上这些错误都是一些习惯错误，总体来说你的话写得已经很不错了。我要对你严格要求，对吗？
Hope you can understand what I’m saying, feel free to ask me if there is any problem.
Cya
Jess
oh... forgot something:)
我今天接到一封”来自”北京语言大学的信。/我今天接到一封从北京语言大学来的信。
Jess，多谢改正错误，我非常感谢。可是我不会更新博客因为我想它体现我的中文。
Thanks for correcting my mistakes Jess, I really appreciate it. I won’t update the blog though as I want it to reflect my own Chinese.
About 2, that was really the way it was written in the admission notice. Given that they are a Chinese language university, is it likely that this is a typo?
Hi, 菲利普! (hope you like this name:P)
“学习的间” doesn’t make any sense to me anyway!
Yeah, I don’t think you should update it, because this would show your progress in learning Chinese. I pointed them out only for your convenince to learn Chinese.:)
Cheers
Jess